We will walk forever, eternity
From the coral, blood-splattered open grave;
We cry, but no tears will set our eyes free.
Dead eyes of lifeblood, dead homes made me flee,
Ebony ghosts slice your shallowness; rave!
We will walk forever, eternity.
So dare, look at me, a skeleton tree,
Tongue stiff and twig limbs; eye sockets a cave;
We cry, but no tears will set our eyes free.
You say in America we’ll be free,
Scatter us orphans, in vain tongue your “save;”
We will walk forever, eternity.
Phantoms of family condemn us to be
Lonely, to torment forever a slave,
We cry, but no tears will set our eyes free.
Home stays a taunting and flaming decree,
Foreign enigma price makes us walk brave.
We will walk forever, eternity,
We cry, but no tears will set our eyes free.
Here is a link to some information about the Lost Boys of Sudan. http://nahalhumanitiesgreen.blogspot.com/2010/03/where-do-we-belong.html
Here is a link to some information about the Lost Boys of Sudan. http://nahalhumanitiesgreen.blogspot.com/2010/03/where-do-we-belong.html
yes, epicly owning the villanelle form! this is beautiful! you wrote some excellent refrains-- i enjoyed hearing them repeated. I really liked "coral" grave, and the way you wrapped "Phantoms of family condemn us to be/Lonely" onto the next line. It made the "Lonely" very powerful. i also like the title-- it helps me understand what you're conveying here :)
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